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Woe's Listener... by *H3120-X:iconH3120-X:



Woeful wanderers seldom see.
Things in this world that are sorrow free.

Their hearts have been hardened by sinful sights,
Never again feeling love's delights...

In oaken chair he told the troubled tale,
Scarred voice creeping from shadowy veil.

As patrons listened to taxed traveler talk,
Warm blue tears drowned them in shock.

Without warning, the old man stopped,
Only to see that dull blue dropped.

Quickly he carries himself, from chair to door,
His high-hard boots clanging 'gainst wood floor.

And it was there that he stood, shedding a tear as well,
Taking not but a moment to bid them all farewell.

I gazed to the door as he stepped into the rain.
Indeed it was true, this man had seen great pain.

So I sat in my chair, and I did brood,
Coming to this thought, with which I conclude:

"Woeful wanderers seldom see,
Things in this world that are sorrow free..."
©2007-2009 *H3120-X
:iconh3120-x:

Author's Comments

Yep, did this during my advisory time at school. Complete time to write was around 50 minutes. Um, I really like this poem. Really my only decent poem i think. First poem I have ever submitted on here at least. Yep, Hope you enjoy. The setting incase you cant guess is a fantasy style tavern.

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:iconhorses-howl:
Very Nice rythm
scheme. lol Good work :clap: And my keyboard is messed up if this message
comes out weird. :)

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Why howl with the wind, when you can howl with the horses.
:iconh3120-x:
thankies :)

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poetry: [link]

unofficial supporter of SalvatoreRP [link]
:iconhorses-howl:
Anytime, and thanks for the thanks. :3

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Why howl with the wind, when you can howl with the horses.
:iconkimete:
Lyrical. :) It could be a song.

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-- I'm falling and I can't see the ground, but that's okay. The wind excites me. --

"I believe. I believe. I believe..."
:iconh3120-x:
Thanks :) strange how did you find this? It's pretty far back in my gallery, even if it is one of the better things in here. lol

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poetry: [link]

unofficial supporter of SalvatoreRP [link]
:iconkimete:
Your poetry link. :XD: ! In your signature. ;)

I stumbled upon it while reading a journal on the Legend RP.

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-- I'm falling and I can't see the ground, but that's okay. The wind excites me. --

"I believe. I believe. I believe..."
:iconh3120-x:
Ahh.. nice ^^for keepersoftimerp -nods-

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poetry: [link]

unofficial supporter of SalvatoreRP [link]
:iconkimete:
Yes, indeed. ~Chuckles.~

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-- I'm falling and I can't see the ground, but that's okay. The wind excites me. --

"I believe. I believe. I believe..."
:iconxxshard-of-a-heartxx:
Awesome, bro.
You really should submit more fo your poetry.
I think you've always been fantastic.
:]

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STRAND
of a memory.
SHARD
of a heart.
:blackrose:

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